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English Writing Skills Summarising Class 11

SUMMARISING follows note-making. The purpose of note-making is usually for one’s own personal reference. If the main points are to be reported we present a summary. It is not as severely shortened as note-making.

Summarising is the selection and paraphrasing of all important information of the original source. This is done by analysing the paragraphs/passage in order to formulate a plan of writing.

The process of summarising would involve the steps followed in note-making:

  1. underlining important ideas
  2. writing them down, abridging the verbs
  3. avoiding examples, explanations, repetition.

However, instead of nominalising the points (changing verbs into nouns), we expand the points into full sentences and link them using suitable connectors. We need to be precise in our expression. The summary will contain all the main ideas of the original. Practice in using one word for many will help.

For example:

  • Children who show intelligence far beyond their age often turn out to be mediocre in adult life.

or

  • Precocious children often turn out to be mediocre in adult life.

 

  • Her genius was marked by excellence in the various arts, languages and science.

or

  • She was a versatile genius.

 

 

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Now read the following text underlining important words as you go along.

Soybeans belong to the legume family. The beans are the seeds of the leguminous soybean plant. They can be grown on a variety of soils and in a wide range of climates. Soybeans are versatile as they can be used as whole beans, soy sprouts, or processed as a variety of food items, such as soy milk, tofu, tempeh, textured vegetable protein, miso, soy sauce, soy oil and margarine, and soy dairy alternatives. They are also used for making candles and bio-diesel.

Soy is an excellent source of high quality protein; is low in saturated fats and is cholestrol-free. It is also rich in vitamins, especially Vitamin B complex, minerals such as magnesium, calcium, iron, potassium and copper and also fibres. In recent times it has been highly recommended because of its ability to lower the levels of Low Density Lipoprotein (LDL), a bad cholesterol. The Food and Drug Administration (FDA), has confirmed that foods containing soy protein are likely to reduce the risk of coronary heart disease.

An easy way to take soy is as soymilk now available with added flavour. Soymilk does not contain lactose (milk sugar) and can be drunk by those who are allergic to normal milk. To get soymilk, soybeans are soaked in water, ground and then strained. If you don’t mind the trouble, you can also make it at home. (225 words).

Now note down the important points.

  • Soybeans are the seeds of the soybean plant of the legume family.
  • They grow in a variety of soils and climates.
  • They can be used in various forms — beans, sprouts and a variety of food items.
  • They are also used to make candles and bio-diesel.
  • They are a source of high quality protein, vitamins, minerals and fibres. They are low in fat content and cholesterol. They can lower LDL levels and reduces risk of coronary heart disease.
  • Soymilk, lactose-free, is available as flavoured milk and can be drunk by those allergic to ordinary milk and can also be made at home by soaking the beans, grinding them and straining the water. (111 words)

A summary is usually one-third the length of the original passage. This is about half.

Now think of what we can omit to make the summary more brief as shown below.

The soybean leguminous plant which grows in all kinds of soil and climate yields beans, sprouts and a variety of processed food items and dairy alternatives and is also used to make candles and bio-diesel.

Rich in protein, vitamins, minerals and fibres, it has a low fat and cholesterol content. It lowers LDL levels and reduces the risk of coronary heart disease.

Soymilk which is lactose-free is available as flavoured milk and agrees with people allergic to ordinary milk. It can be made at home by soaking, grinding and straining soybean. (90 words)

Try reducing it further to about 72 words.

Soybean, a legume, growing in a variety of soil and climatic

conditions, yields beans, sprouts and a variety of food items

and is used in making candles and bio-diesel.

Rich in protein, vitamins, minerals and fibres, it is low in

cholesterol and fat. It lowers LDL levels and reduces the risk

of coronary heart disease. Soymilk, lactose-free, is available

flavoured and taken by people allergic to milk. It can also be

made at home. (74 words)

Notice that we have phrases in apposition: ‘a legume’, between

commas; present participles: ‘growing’ to effect reduction. Instead

of ‘it is rich in…’ we have used ‘rich in…’ and postponed the main

verb in the sentence. Almost all the main points have been covered.

Read the text below and summarise it.

Green Sahara

The Great Desert Where Hippos Once Wallowed

The Sahara sets a standard for dry land. It’s the world’s

largest desert. Relative humidity can drop into the low single

digits. There are places where it rains only about once a

 

 

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century. There are people who reach the end of their lives

without ever seeing water come from the sky.

Yet beneath the Sahara are vast aquifers of fresh water,

enough liquid to fill a small sea. It is fossil water, a treasure

laid down in prehistoric times, some of it possibly a million

years old. Just 6,000 years ago, the Sahara was a much

different place.

It was green. Prehistoric rock art in the Sahara shows

something surprising: hippopotamuses, which need

year-round water.

“We don’t have much evidence of a tropical paradise out

there, but we had something perfectly liveable,” says Jennifer

Smith, a geologist at Washington University in St Louis.

The green Sahara was the product of the migration of

the paleo-monsoon. In the same way that ice ages come and

go, so too do monsoons migrate north and south. The

dynamics of earth’s motion are responsible. The tilt of the

earth’s axis varies in a regular cycle — sometimes the planet

is more tilted towards the sun, sometimes less so. The axis

also wobbles like a spinning top. The date of the earth’s

perihelion — its closest approach to the sun — varies in a

cycle as well.

At times when the Northern Hemisphere tilts sharply

towards the sun and the planet makes its closest approach,

the increased blast of sunlight during the north’s summer

months can cause the African monsoon (which currently

occurs between the Equator and roughly 170N latitude) to

shift to the north as it did 10,000 years ago, inundating

North Africa.

Around 5,000 years ago the monsoon shifted dramatically

southward again. The prehistoric inhabitants of the Sahara

discovered that their relatively green surroundings were

undergoing something worse than a drought (and perhaps

they migrated towards the Nile Valley, where Egyptian culture

began to flourish at around the same time).

“We’re learning, and only in recent years, that some

climate changes in the past have been as rapid as anything

underway today,” says Robert Giegengack, a University of

Pennsylvania geologist.

As the land dried out and vegetation decreased, the soil

lost its ability to hold water when it did rain. Fewer clouds

 

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formed from evaporation. When it rained, the water washed

away and evaporated quickly. There was a kind of runaway

drying effect. By 4,000 years ago the Sahara had become

what it is today.

No one knows how human-driven climate change may

alter the Sahara in the future. It’s something scientists

can ponder while sipping bottled fossil water pumped

from underground.

“It’s the best water in Egypt,” Giegengack said — clean,

refreshing mineral water. If you want to drink something

good, try the ancient buried treasure of the sahara.

 

 

JOEL ACHENBACK

Staff Writer, Washington Post